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When you love and lose,
Everyone understands,
But when you just lose,
It’s less understandable,

It’s like a paper cut,
Instead of a gash,
The pain is less,
But it burns more,

And no one can see it,
No one can sympathize,
Because it’s just a paper cut,
And once it’s gone so is the pain,

No one can feel my heart burning,
No one can hear my mind yearning,
No one can even see,
My tiny paper cut,

I wanted everything,
And I got nothing,
And so I’m dying,
Of a paper cut,

How pathetic.
©2009 ~Beckimudd
:iconbeckimudd:

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Just an idea... I think i'm gonna keep playing with it.

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:icontheinvisibleunknown:
becki! this is great! i haven't been on in a long time but this is really touching and i can definitely empathize...I hope you're doing well, continue writing. This peice was very simple, and very straight to the point. THe very last stanza is a clincher, killer, finisher, ultimate combo super power...The sense of sarcasm, or badass attitude. The feel of patheticness. it is great!

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Life doesnt make sense at all... But the point of life, is not to understand it... But to make each and every living day, worthwhile. Don't hold back, live your life and push forward...

Death seems sweet after everything goes wrong....
:iconbeckimudd:
Aw thank you I am so glad you enjoyed it so much! It has been a long time, I'm looking forward to seeing some of your new work!
~Becki

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